Ah finally got to see it now.
Constructive criticism (hopefully)
Most reels are around 1 min long, this is nearly 3 !
All of the break downs are way to long, definitely shorten them down, I doubt anyone needs to see each and every pass, just a couple will suffice.
If someone is REALLY interested, they will ask to see a more detailed break down I'm sure of it
I'd rather see the completed piece right at the start.
The shot where he is looking at the car, and the camera is behind. He looks overly bright like there is a big light on him but it's not shining on the building or ground, feels a bit odd. (I know it was mentioned already)
Other wise, it's a really great piece - edit - edit- edit